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四六级写作:现象分析型高分模板,助你轻松涨分

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  四六级笔试考试中的写作有一类常考题型,即现象分析型,这类作文在考查时要么是图画作文、要么是图表作文,还有可能是普通现象分析型作文,比如2016年12月考过的“是就业还是考研”或“创新”,就是这类作文。因此中公四六级小编给大家准备了现象分析型作文的写作思路和模板供大家参考。

  1.考题回顾

  1)[2013.6]Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay. You should start your essay with a brief description of the picture and then express your views on the importance of doing small things before undertaking something big. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.

  2)[2012.12]Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Education Pays based on the statistics provided in the chart below (Weekly earnings in 2010). Please give a brief description of the chart first and then make comments on it. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.

  3)[2012.6]Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the topic Excessive Packaging following the outline given below. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words following the outline given below.

  1.目前许多商品存在过度包装的现象。

  2.出现这一现象的原因。

  3.我对这一现象的看法和建议。

  2.写作思路

  第一段---描述图画/图表/现象

  第二段---分析原因

  第三段---给出评论

  3.写作模板

  第一段---

  1)Here is a picture, simple but with profound implication. From the picture, we can see that 尽量重复图片中的话 . The picture tells us that .

  2)Here is a picture, simple but with profound implication. As is vividly/graphically depicted in the drawing,描述图画. Apparently, the cartoonist means to tell us that 主旨 .

  3)What is shown in the bar chart above is 重复题目. According to the bar chart, we clearly get the information that . For instance, while .

  4)As is shown by the figure/ percentage in the table, _作文题目的议题_ goes up/ drops significantly, rising/ decreasing from__数字_ in __年份_ to 数字 in __年份_. From the changes in the chart, it goes without saying that ________.

  5)With the advancement of society and the development of economy, many things change dramatically. For example, the past several years have witnessed the appearance of a not uncommon social phenomenon that .

  6)With the rapid development of modern life, the society has been changed in all aspects unimaginably and many things changed accordingly. Some of them have positive effects on our life, but some are distasteful. The phenomenon of主题现象 is an example of the former / latter one.

  第二段---

  1)The following reasons, on my personal level, can perfectly account for this opinion/ phenomenon. One important reason is that 原因 . In addition, 原因 . Last but definitely not least, 原因 .

  2)What exactly contributes to such phenomenon/ opinion? The reasons, which are obvious to all, can be listed as follows. To begin with, 原因之一 . In addition, 理由之二 .

  3)A number of factors can account for such phenomenon/opinion, but the followings might be the critical ones. First and foremost, 原因之一 . Besides, .

  第三段---

  1) Taking all these factors into consideration, we may reasonably come to the conclusion that .

  2)From what has been discussed above, we may naturally draw the conclusion that .

  4.高分范文

  Doing Small Things Is Important

  Here is a picture, simple but with profound implication. From the picture, we can see that the boy is worried about disposing of nuclear waste. However, his father thinks he should empty the dustbin first. The picture tells us that doing small things before undertaking something big is very important.

  The following reasons, on my personal level, can perfectly account for this opinion. One important reason is that doing small things is the basis of doing something great. Only when we do small things well, can we do something great. In addition, by doing so, we are able to accumulate experience and master essential skills. We must be fully prepared before we do something big. Last but definitely not least, doing small things also helps to develop good habits. In the later years, those habits would be beneficial when we deal with something important.

  Taking all these factors into consideration, we may reasonably come to the conclusion that doing small things well will bring great benefits to us. Apparently, we should pay more attention to do small things well.

  Education Pays

  What is shown in the chart above is weekly earnings of different people with different education backgrounds. According to the chart, we clearly learn the information that people

  with a higher education degree earns more money than people with a lower degree. For instance, people with a doctoral degree earns 1551 dollars a week while those with high school diploma earns 626 dollars.

  The following reason, in my eyes, can perfectly account for this opinion. One important reason is that those who failed to get a better education will hardly succeed in getting a well paid job because they didn’t get the knowledge that the job need systematically and scientifically. In addition, those who failed in school only can occupy on the job that is quiet simple and don’t need much knowledge, and that kind of jobs’ salary is low.

  From what has been discussed above, we may naturally draw the conclusion that we should focus more on our study in order to get the knowledge that was needed in the job.

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